Friday, 10 March 2017

Mackenzie's story about "The Rain"

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I hate the rain because I love the sun and because it is better to play in the sun. I blow balloons because I have a party in my room and I put my own disco light then we have a party. I don’t like sleeping when it is raining.

Author:  Mackenzie Cameron

Today I received 11 stickers because I wrote 11 lines of writing in my writing book. I used capital letters and full stops.


  1. Wow... amazing work Mackenzie and a great story!!! So proud of how hard you are working in Te Awa with Miss Simmonds.. keep it up :-)

  2. Hello MacKenzie. I enjoyed reading your writing. I like the sun too. You are a good writer. Keep working on your capital letters and full stops.

  3. Hi T Awa. Love your writing. When you said i hate it when it rains because after that it didn't make sense. How does the stickers work in your class.
    Good biy friends

  4. Hi Mackenzie,
    Your story is so cool about the rain and sun I like having parties in my room to. But I love listening to the rain when I am sleeping. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

    From Bella