Friday, 10 March 2017

Mackenzie's story about "The Rain"


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I hate the rain because I love the sun and because it is better to play in the sun. I blow balloons because I have a party in my room and I put my own disco light then we have a party. I don’t like sleeping when it is raining.

Author:  Mackenzie Cameron

Today I received 11 stickers because I wrote 11 lines of writing in my writing book. I used capital letters and full stops.

3 comments:

  1. Wow... amazing work Mackenzie and a great story!!! So proud of how hard you are working in Te Awa with Miss Simmonds.. keep it up :-)

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  2. Hello MacKenzie. I enjoyed reading your writing. I like the sun too. You are a good writer. Keep working on your capital letters and full stops.

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  3. Hi T Awa. Love your writing. When you said i hate it when it rains because after that it didn't make sense. How does the stickers work in your class.
    Good biy friends
    Franky

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