tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7753156840847932472.post8970969301121079112..comments2023-05-26T13:02:22.479+12:00Comments on Te Awa: Mackenzie's story about "The Rain"Te Awahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16437321858595314769noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7753156840847932472.post-53589803285581659112017-07-03T12:37:59.993+12:002017-07-03T12:37:59.993+12:00Hi Mackenzie,
Your story is so cool about the rain...Hi Mackenzie,<br />Your story is so cool about the rain and sun I like having parties in my room to. But I love listening to the rain when I am sleeping. I look forward to reading more of your stories.<br /><br />From BellaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7753156840847932472.post-19474486953550587942017-06-19T10:29:05.865+12:002017-06-19T10:29:05.865+12:00Hi T Awa. Love your writing. When you said i hate ...Hi T Awa. Love your writing. When you said i hate it when it rains because after that it didn't make sense. How does the stickers work in your class.<br />Good biy friends <br />FrankyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7753156840847932472.post-60521881465754821982017-03-13T11:56:26.471+13:002017-03-13T11:56:26.471+13:00Hello MacKenzie. I enjoyed reading your writing. I...Hello MacKenzie. I enjoyed reading your writing. I like the sun too. You are a good writer. Keep working on your capital letters and full stops.Mrs Lindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10325100045675627873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7753156840847932472.post-72717586491429974692017-03-12T22:02:03.087+13:002017-03-12T22:02:03.087+13:00Wow... amazing work Mackenzie and a great story!!...Wow... amazing work Mackenzie and a great story!!! So proud of how hard you are working in Te Awa with Miss Simmonds.. keep it up :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08286473570795210359noreply@blogger.com