Our goal for our writing is to write an interesting story.
Why? Because it will be more fun for people to read our stories.
How will we do this?
1. Use interesting words.
2. Say how we felt.
I rode my bike down the hill. I couldn't stop and I crashed! Into a power pole and the handlebars scraped my stomach. It hurt a lot. I cried.
By Revere
When I came down from parachuting I saw a kiwi. I was happy because I saw a kiwi and a baby kiwi.
By Atawhai
I had a dream that I was dancing in my garden with my teddy and there was a big hole in the roof and we ran out into my house. It made me feel very happy. I tripped over on rocks, it hurt a lot.
By Eva-Rose
Eva-Rose
By Eva-Rose
I like playing Minecraft. I like crafting stuff. I love destroying Zombies. I like destroying the whole city and the characters. I like seeing the Zombies. It makes me feel fantastic when I play Minecraft.
By Sonny
Sonny
I was dancing in the rain. It was fun. Me and my brother Archie were dancing in the rain in my garden. I felt happy because I like getting wet.
By Harry
By Harry
I was riding my bike with my Mum. We were going back home from a ride. I hopped off my bike. I felt good because I wanted to see my Dad and he picked me up after. My Dad bought me some strawberries.
By Dyllyn
I was riding my bike when my Daddy was watching me. I was happy.
By Lily-Rose
